Denny: SO hmmm. The big bubble should be “The wind element, she governs inspiration and memories, some call her Erio.” …but not souding so bad >>; Denny should ask “but it was corrupted?” but now I think “governs memories?” seems like more right thing to ask. And the last panel … I`m not too sure what to have as dialogue here now =_=;

L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – a muse of inspiration and memory.” Is that better?

Denny: Yep! Hm can we say “muse force”? Since she isn`t a muse like how there are other muses in fanfyria, a different entity

L.: (I also like Grumpy sorta forcing a humanizing element by saying She instead of Denny’s It.) Okay, hang on.

Denny: Yeah ^^

L.: It’s a little weird, cuz she’s more of a muse than they are when you’re talking about mythology, so my phrasing is getting a little jumbled.

Denny: Oh she is. Maybe high muse or something to make her stand out?

L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – a fount of inspiration and memory.” Or Aspect? Which is kinda like Element.

Denny: I`ve always called them Muse Forces ^^a;; but I was also not so good with the english language back then so not sure how silly that sounded.

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L.: Essence might also work as a title for them.

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L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – the essence of inspiration and memory.”

Denny: Alrighty that works!

L.: It makes her sound much more important that way, and she is.

Denny: Yup! Thus why corrupting her would corrupt the whole world D8 The void knows where to strike!

L.: “You said back on the roof that it’s corrupted, right?” (Was it the roof?)

Denny: yeah was a roof

L.: And then we have Grumpy quietly say She again for emphasis, and then have Denny catch on. >.>

Denny: hmm maybe have the last panel be something like “Yes, I don`t know why or how.”
“What happens when the wind is corrupted?”
“bad things.”

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L.: “Yes, but I don’t know what happened to her, or why.”
“So what happens when the wind… When she’s corrupted?”
“A darkness I could only guess at.”

[rambling redacted, you're welcome]

Denny: Hm won`t “Bad things.” for Grumps reply be better considering he is still bit of a jerk and probably wants to finish the convo soon and be off to bed XD;

L.: I dunno, it kinda makes it sound like he doesn’t take it seriously.

Denny: Maybe “Try and guess?”

L.: “Take a wild guess.” Try that. It implies sarcasm.

Denny: perfect! :’D